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ayabrea




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PostSubject: About my char aya brea   About my char aya brea I_icon_minitimeTue Jun 07, 2011 2:09 am

so heres a rough idea i have for a backstory so far



She was taken from her parents at a young age. Forced into slavery and forced to fight in arenas. One day she saw her chance to escape. Made it out now years later she has grown stronger and ready to fight back.


once again rough idea for now let me know what you think!
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Duscus




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PostSubject: Re: About my char aya brea   About my char aya brea I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 09, 2011 3:08 am

Constructive criticism: I know it's hard to be original sometimes but the first half of that is literally Conan the Barbarian. Perhaps it'd be good to brainstorm on this with some others on things that could spice up the backstory and make it pop out a little more.
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ayabrea




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PostSubject: Re: About my char aya brea   About my char aya brea I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 09, 2011 4:04 am

yeah im still getting used to this im not a writer but me and the g/f are working on it
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